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Reminds me of when my mum used to sing me to sleep

It sure does. She used to sing me to sleep, and this is the same kind of mood which I used to get when she was singing to me.
I love the instruments and the soft (well duh... :P) strings and pads in the background.
Seriously, this is so like what my mum used to sing. This song really hits a chord with me.
Really great, and I've got no criticism.

Awesome. Great theme and mood.

It's that kind of sinister... but fun mood. Like the Mafia having a birthday party or something. I really liked it.

Nice!

Cheery melody. Nicely put together too. Just a nice feel all round. It's the same chords, over and over, but somehow it doesn't get boring. I guess it's that it builds up and every measure is slightly different. I like it. Only thing is that that blippy synth doesn't really seem to fit in. Also, the drums should have had less fills, and more keeping the beat. But whatever. Was really nice.

Slart responds:

The blippy synth is my (sad) midi attempt at pizzicato/plucked violins. Clearly, my midi skills are weak (I know this) and if I get better at creating instruments, I'll fix it up mo bettah. That's funny what you said about the drum fills, because I was worried the drums were too boring so I added the fills to flesh them out a bit. Maybe I should've had more confidence. Ah well, I'll learn as I go.

Generic?

Pretty generic drums, pretty basic textures. Repeating melody. Sorry, doesn't really cut it for me.

It was ok.

I've never used Garage Band, so I'm not sure, but it sounds like you've just dragged and dropped pre-made samples. The instruments don't really match up, and it would be nice if it had different sections, maybe change chords or something.

Pretty good!

Those melodies were really nice. Everything fitted nicely. But there was a big problem with it.
The sync and timing was well off. You should record stuff into a sequencer so you can adjust the timing.
So yeah, if it was synced properly I'd love this song. 4/5 :)

Interesting message in the vocals.

I'm not joking- because there's no vocals it really says something. It's the animal's song, I presume about all the hardship and trouble they go through- and they have no voice to tell anyone. So that was very moving. Thanks for uploading this for us to hear.

Woah.

Seriously. Woah. This gave me chills! So beautiful. I love the layered choir of harmonies on the vocals. The only complaints would be the length, and the sudden change in dynamics about 35 seconds in.
But overall, amazing tune. Really touching too.
I'm not promising anything, but could I have the files to 'play with' please? I'm terrible at finishing things, but it would be really nice to maybe do an ambient remix of this. I could add some electronic subtleties to it, maybe. So yeah, if I could have some files of the separate tracks to play around with, that would be very nice of you :)

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